It DOES work, but it sounds a bit Beavis and Butthead to me - and I was young enough enough when I first liked Beavis and Butthead to know it's now old

Doesn't mean there's anything wrong with old though - I mean, punk's at least 30 this year, and it's not doing so bad for its age...
So to put it the other way round, I prefer the second, but both rock...