GridStream Productions

I have what will hopefully be the first chapter of a serialised novel up on the forums:

http://www.gridstream.org/forums/viewtopic.php?p=78273#78273

This is the first time I've attempted anything of this length, so any comments welcomed.

</gratiutous self promostion>

Myz - Can't read the whole thing just now, but I promise I will get back to it either later today or tomorrow. I did read the first paragraph though, and so far, I like it.

*huggles*
Valli

Myz, I read it all the way through last night and I must say that I absolutely loved it. Your takes on the froob/noob invasion of West Athens and the Subway were very well done. Your peeks at the professions and races were also well thought out and not just cookie cutter. There was a certain originality that made plausible sense with the world of Rubika.

Also, the story was a good one. This is an aspect that I don't know if I've seen read in any other RP story. I think I'm going to very much enjoy finding out what is really going on here.

Keep it up!
Valli

Thanks hon Glad you enjoyed it. And thanks for letting me know (and to others that have said stuff elsewhere) - I'd keep writing this regardless of whether anyone was reading it but it's good to know it's not just me spouting random crap that only makes sense to me. I do enough of that at shows, after all

I'm going to try to update it every week... feel free to whip, spank or otherwise punish me if I don't...

*grabs spatula...taps foot*